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I sink inside of me
With a need to think,
Taking a deep breath,
I say a prayer for peace.
With a need to think,
I block out your voice.
I say a prayer for peace,
And hope that it comes fast.
I block out your voice,
Searching for enlightenment,
And hoping that it comes fast
To make this all make sense.
Searching for enlightenment,
Taking a deep breath,
Wishing for this to all make sense,
I sink inside of me.
©2007-2010 ~CyndeeCyanide
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Author's Comments

I feel the need to point out that this is actually a real poetry form, called the pantoum. It follows the line pattern of 1-2-3-4-2-5-4-6-4-7-6-8-7-3-8-1. Which is a bit odd and confusing, but it still is pretty effective.

I really am too lazy to actually explain anything about it. So bluah.

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